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I'm hating you (I love you)
Contributed by
Squishy
on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:55:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am drowning in the puddles of my mistakes
While my head is spinning
And my bodys numb from the beating.
I am coming down from this drunken stupor
And theres empty bottles on the floor along side my bruised ego.
Oh baby cant you see me dying here from sharpened words and broken hopes.
Dear love of mine, I just cannot do this anymore
Cause Im hating you (I love you).
Im begging you to just go (Please stay).
Im giving up (Ill keep fighting).
Im letting go (Im holding on so tight).
Sweet angel I am done with you (Its not over).
This is goodbye (This is hello).
Im dead to you (Im just introducing myself).
Let me go (Hold me tight)
Im hating you (I love you).
Copyright ©
Squishy
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2006-05-24 09:55:07]
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Re: I'm hating you (I love you)
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by spider on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 10:12:10 AM AEST
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| that would make such a great song. i love everything about it :D it's really great |
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Re: I'm hating you (I love you)
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by lost_in_the_darkness09 on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 02:04:38 PM AEST
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THis was a really nice, poem, and i agree with spider, it should be a song. it's really great, you took the feelings that people feel all the time and actually put it into words. i admire that.
*LLUVIA* |
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Re: I'm hating you (I love you)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:45:13 AM AEST
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Oh the constant conflicting emotions . . . and affliction love so often
curses our poor hearts with. It's difficult just to know what to do.
You have captured that internal fight perfectly here. I understand. And
with an intensity I wish I sometimes didn't.
Well done!
~Breezy |
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Re: I'm hating you (I love you)
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by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:22:41 AM AEST
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You've done this great.
The eternal struggles the only one we cannot really win.
Great write have to say i can relate to this.
Keep up the good work |
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