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silence
Contributed by
sride686
on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 03:53:07 PM in AEST
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Whispers in silence
And glooms of the night
These shadows that pass
Through the times of our life
Glitters of sunshine
With thoughts from the past
Friends that Ive had
And friends that have passed
Like the ocean at war my mind starts rage
Emotions and thoughts
As my memories change
Bad becomes good
Like the seasons bring change
Away with the old
So my heart can remain
Waters of rain
That replenishes my soul
Flow from my eyes
And cleanse out my soul
Look unto heaven
With tears in my eyes
They flow from my heart
To renew my mind
I see struggles in future
But some struggles passed
For Ive found my true love
That will take my life past
Like the gate keeper of time
She holds all these rhymes
So my words will be true
As they pass from me unto you
I open my mouth but I shall not speak
I pickup my pin were I find my release
As my words start to flow my pain starts to go
But till were together at last my pain shell not pass
So flow from my heart and flow from my soul
This river of love that makes my life hole
~Steve~
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Re: silence
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by djdarkrose04 on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:02:58 PM AEST
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I love the imagery that you portray in this poem. I was captured by this phrase...
"Like the gate keeper of time
She holds all these rhymes
So my words will be true
As they pass from me unto you"
I look forward to seeing more of your poems on here. Keep up the great work! |
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Re: silence
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 09:40:11 PM AEST
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well long time no see steve.
Like any other writes this one is excellent.
great job.
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Re: silence
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by SilverRain on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 07:03:36 PM AEST
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| This is really a touching piece...loved it. |
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Re: silence
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Wednesday, 10th November 2010 @ 05:13:57 AM AEST
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| Really really nice God has given you a gift always use that keep writting. |
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