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suffering soul
Contributed by
firearchdruid
on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 12:00:44 AM in AEST
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let the fires come filling me up burning my soul
give me the pain i need give me the fuel
dying inside ceasing to be me any more
spread open feeling inside out and tore
never really knowing whats going on around me
eternally blind never even wanting to see
set free in everbinding death unescapable punishment
abide by the rules the book says fall over and repent
burn and rot suffer forever torment alone is what I say
let the mouth be sealed shut let the skin not live another day
i come with wide open arms to the ever darkening hell
as i said before not myself whats left is an empty shell
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2006-05-25 00:00:44]
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Re: suffering soul
(User Rating: 1 )
by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:25:25 AM AEST
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Not all poetry needs to rhyme.
And at times i feel like your forcing it too.
Just go with what comes from your heart.
I understand your messege and overall this is a good poem.
Keep up the good work.
Liam |
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Re: suffering soul
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by Arijadna77 on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 08:25:26 PM AEST
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| reminds me of my favorite band,Depeche mode....oh,i love it!!! |
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