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The Door
Contributed by
TwistedCage
on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 05:13:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I see reality
standing
within the realms
of oblivion,
twisted obscene
with pains
and the rainbows
of pleasure.
This prison in the midst
of an absolute reality,
locked behind a door
which is,
in all its bondage,
the very essence of life.
So beautiful, its inevitable;
so absolute, its feared.
Humanity bound forever
within its cage,
where the
devastating brilliance
of loss come to all.
This is the reality,
this is life;
there is no escape,
but the end,
for locked is this door
called death...
Copyright ©
TwistedCage
... [
2006-05-25 05:13:49]
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Re: The Door
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 06:56:22 AM AEST
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wow, it makes you read it until the end. flowed wonderfully, liked it.
Be good and Take care
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Re: The Door
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by n2dep2care on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 01:17:43 PM AEST
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Very wonderful and thought enriching
I love your concepts and descriptions.
Beautiful work here, keep it up!
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Re: The Door
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by StormyNites on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 03:41:45 AM AEST
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| what can I say..you are a master with words |
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