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Tendered in Blood
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 01:11:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Tendered in blood
Her payment for love
Lost to herself
No family or friends
He is all she has
Forced into solitude
Hidden bruises
Pierced heart
Begging for mercy
None to come
Drunken rages
Followed by empty apologies
Tendered in blood
Her payment for love
Lost to this world
She found peace at last
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2006-05-25 13:11:47]
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Re: Tendered in Blood
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by kaitee on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 01:27:40 PM AEST
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This is so sad! I felt the emotion in every line.
Keep 'em coming.
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Re: Tendered in Blood
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 02:57:46 PM AEST
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Ouch grrl.... I dunno if I could handle this much tragedy in one week.... Very emotional piece....
Hugs
Jenni
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Re: Tendered in Blood
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by shelby on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 03:44:21 PM AEST
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This is very real to me gave me chills, glad those days are over and Im not over lol.A very emotional write and so real.
Michelle |
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Re: Tendered in Blood
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by EddieDean on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 04:09:56 PM AEST
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Very good poem, very emotional. I could feel the hurt you are going through. Good work.
-Eddie Dean |
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Re: Tendered in Blood
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 08:47:43 PM AEST
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Just beautiful
And becomes prenant with meaninjg if one can emphasize deeply experience - as I do
Peace and Light
Elizabeth |
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