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Hurricane
Contributed by
SweetHeartDealer
on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 02:20:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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I hear he beats his girlfriend now
She waits for him with baited breath
He storms in with beer on his
A hurricane
Rage unexplained
Destruction unsurpassed
No one is spared
Not even she
He tears her down
And throws her around
Until she screams in agony
And salty tears corrode her skin
By the next morning
She's batttered and broken
Shattered and torn
But she won't leave him
She says the blue of the bruises
Brings out her eyes
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SweetHeartDealer
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2006-05-25 14:20:43]
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Re: Hurricane
(User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 02:38:57 PM AEST
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| honestly i didnt like it at all, didnt really rhyme, maybe you should get this edited and use http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Rhymer for rhyming |
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