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With Every Breeze
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 03:14:43 PM in AEST
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Gentle winds
Summers breeze
Through his mind
Sent memories
Of a time when love
Showered his life
When an angel
He was making his wife
She floated down the aisle
In her gown of white
Oh what a most
Miraculous sight
His heart filled with joy
As she said I Do
Then she leaned in gently
And said I will always love you
But time has it own
Way of changing things
And she was taken
To Heaven the next spring
So here he sits
Remembering
The summers love
Rather than horrific spring
Thankful he knew
Love so fine
Her essence embraces
With every breeze divine
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NoSaint
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2006-05-25 15:14:43]
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Re: With Every Breeze
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by shelby on
Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 03:39:06 PM AEST
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oh this was pretty and sad all at the same time Shari, you did a great job keep the pen floating girlfriend!
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Re: With Every Breeze
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 09:49:35 AM AEST
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Oh, Shari, how unbelievably sad and tragic.
'Tis a beautiful piece none-the-less hun. But what an
utterly horrible fate for both. Unspeakable. You
captured the devotion and love that transcends time
in this though. The flow is perfect.
Wonderful post!
~Breezy |
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