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The Lot You Live On
Contributed by
Neutron
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Thursday, 25th May 2006 @ 04:55:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Ruby bricks and shingles of gold,
Diamond windows and shutters of emerald,
Perfect geometry and tall fences of silver,
A flawless construction that never grew old.
Garnet grass and earth upturned,
Mucky waters and fetid odors,
Twisted trees and filth a strewn,
A decrepit sight to make the eyes burn.
An image blemished; a lot to live on.
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Neutron
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Re: The Lot You Live On
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by liamleash on
Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:07:05 AM AEST
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| Short and straight to the point. The imagery used is great |
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Re: The Lot You Live On
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th April 2008 @ 09:03:45 AM AEST
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| I loved the imagery in this. It made the poem come alive for me. Great write! |
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