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SOMETIME SOON
Contributed by
coral
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Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 04:43:56 AM in AEST
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It's bout time you showed up
Coz everythin' in my life's gettin' stuffed
I know you're supposed to keep track of my plight
And i'm sure God wants you to make it alright
Ok! I guess im desperate
But it's just because i don't wanna hurt
I've never asked for anythin'
Not even a lottery ticket win
Help me please
Solvin' my problems for you is such an ease
Strengthen a mortal who's down
And i'll promise to thank the Big Man upstairs for havin' you around
Copyright ©
coral
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2006-05-26 04:43:56]
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Re: SOMETIME SOON
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 04:51:36 AM AEST
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Very good write.
Reminds me of the song ,TALK TO YOUR ANGELS.
It goes on to say they will hear your plea. I talk to my angels too and they do work for us deligently.
Keep the faith.
luv, huggs, prayer,
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Re: SOMETIME SOON
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by Lea on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 06:44:52 AM AEST
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i liked that.
kind of sounded like rap. cool. |
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Re: SOMETIME SOON
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by Kirby on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 01:54:29 PM AEST
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We all have our guardian angels and i have had a few encounters with mine. Keep writing, it's a great poem and a great thing to write about..
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Re: SOMETIME SOON
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 09:37:05 AM AEST
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I believe one of the purposes of poetry is prayer. Sometimes it may not sound like prayer; sometimes it may. This is a poem prayin' for strength. God will oblige. I like how ya did yer prayin' through a Guardian Angel. Nice write
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: SOMETIME SOON
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 14th July 2006 @ 08:41:31 AM AEST
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NIcely done..I hope you get the strength you seek.
Jenni |
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