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thoughts of broken rainbows
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 03:12:27 PM in AEST
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like thoughtless accounts of deadend nightmares of cubicals and laywers
waking in a wonderious thought that as a being that is one with himself
needs more positive energy and must be givin in force just not takin lightly with ease
eyes should be opened and walls shall come down and the positive will wear there ragged crown
thunder and enlightment and a rain of cosmic thought needs to cleans the negatve and profound
and bring forth ample amounts of splender and calm rain of happy tiding
instead of the misery that drags and drowns us as a whole and never letting us breath
this is a random chaos of profound images i hope things dont confuse to easy as things always do
but this is the thoughts of the lost and found
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2006-05-26 15:12:27]
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Re: thoughts of broken rainbows
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by shelby on
Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 08:39:58 PM AEST
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I love your abstract writes. THis is nicely done.
Michelle |
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Re: thoughts of broken rainbows
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 11:32:46 AM AEST
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| Little brother, the first line was stabbing.....awesome line, man. It started me spiraling through this piece. Good write. Good ideas. Peace to you, Laura |
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