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The Club of Torture
Contributed by
BrokenXbyManyX
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Friday, 26th May 2006 @ 07:16:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It's called the club of torture.
Everyone's Invited.
Membership Never runs out.
Your in it for life.
To get out can be hell itself.
The screaming, voices, and coldness is just the beginning.
Walking into the pit of flames
Water coming up to your neck.
Oh don't panic now.
The torture will only keep coming.
Except better, longer, harder, better, longer, harder.
Keep quiet and maybe you'll get lucky, panic and your history in the world of nothing and nobody.
Water rises, flames ignigte, the air keeps minimizing.
You wish you could scream.
Asking yourself how did you let yourself come this low?
You keep quiet though and the water rises.
Sweat pores harder and harder.
You can't breath.
You tell yourself only a few more minutes and it's over.
You are silences for an hour.
Times up.
The funs only begun.
We will have another meeting tommorow.
Thanks for joining.
It's been wonderful knowing you.
Copyright ©
BrokenXbyManyX
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Re: The Club of Torture
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 03:27:13 AM AEST
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I think everyone's a member! A nice poem, with some good internal rhyme, well done! (In a non-patronising way!!!)
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Re: The Club of Torture
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by AshRayne on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:33:07 PM AEST
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interesting...
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Re: The Club of Torture
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 10:29:01 AM AEST
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creepy........gotta love it.
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