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WHY CAN'T I FORGET
Contributed by
MarLites
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Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 09:30:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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WHY CANT I FORGET
The pounding of my heart beats
The long hours and days
Wasted
On empty wishes
Of our being together
My mind races
With thoughts of you
Like the constant harsh waterfall
Off a steep cliff
Each thought etching
Deeper and deeper
Into the valleys of my soul
Buried
Are the thoughts of reality
That I should release you
But still one tear-drop falls
And I see
The sparkle of your smile
Reflected in the pool of sadness
So it continues
Another cycle
The pounding of my heart
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MarLites
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2006-05-27 09:30:47]
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Re: WHY CAN'T I FORGET
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by death_not_be_feared on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:21:57 AM AEST
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I think the hardest thing in life is to get over someone. i really like the way you expressed how you felt.i just posted something like this about 5 minutes ago and if you get a chance read it it is called" love sick fool" or another one that i wrote that might help you is "if we can share no love is it worth the sun to come?"
thanks for that great write!
Savannah |
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Re: WHY CAN'T I FORGET
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by jerseysue on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 02:16:03 PM AEST
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| They do say we never forget our loves. We always have a special place for them stored in our hearts. Your words tell of your emotions and feelings so well. Sue xx |
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Re: WHY CAN'T I FORGET
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by ButchCorpuz on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 02:58:18 PM AEST
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I can relate to this so much.
But in my case...
It's not the question of...
"Why I can't forget"
rather, "Why I won't forget"
Great poem! I love it.
Thanks for inspiring me, Mary.
-Butch
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Re: WHY CAN'T I FORGET
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by R0b on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 07:35:13 PM AEST
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| Hey I know how something like that feels. I had at the time the best relationship one could have, but nothing is ever perfect. Very nice write. |
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Re: WHY CAN'T I FORGET
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 10:02:47 AM AEST
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This realy was very compelling 2 read it touched me in a sad way, i felt as i was going through it. great writting very effctive results 2 enable the reader 2 feel as though there part of the plot.
Ben |
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