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Behind the Curtain
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 02:36:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The curtain swishes and closes,
On the audience out there,
What secret is in the darkness,
Hidden dreams or despair,
Closed in within an abyss,
Of dread and broken sleep,
What comfort is their in that,
For you have gone so deep,
What consolation is there,
In hiding from the past,
Open up to life its self,
Here's a hand that you can grasp,
Take little steps to begin,
For you have no need to hurry,
Or will these words startle you,
And once again you will scurry,
Be yourself in all you do,
And face life with all its woes,
And believe in yourself always,
Its a tip from one who knows.
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jerseysue
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2006-05-27 14:36:22]
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Re: Behind the Curtain
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by ham323 on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 05:40:33 PM AEST
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| Loved the poem. It's nice to see you care for your friend like that. Good work. |
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Re: Behind the Curtain
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by ham323 on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 05:40:33 PM AEST
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| Loved the poem. It's nice to see you care for your friend like that. Good work. |
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Re: Behind the Curtain
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 06:05:33 PM AEST
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WEll, it was a good answer. I have a friend who is like that, and also, she thinks that life will be always "pretty". She doesn't know about life, and prefers to hide behind the curtain instead of facing everything that could come. For doing that, when something different happens she just asks "why". Sometimes people have to open up to life.
Great Write. |
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Re: Behind the Curtain
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 05:38:10 PM AEST
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| I really like your style. The rhyme was great and the subject too. great write. |
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Re: Behind the Curtain
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 09:56:55 PM AEST
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You are both obviously a caring friend and a good poetess. You have a very nice flow and finesse in your style.
I know this is late, but welcome to YPDC.
Take care,
Tim
P.S. Hope your answer to your friend helped him.
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