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Your Sacrificial Advice Again
Contributed by
zeequeen
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Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 04:08:14 PM in AEST
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You feel your wisdom is the best
You cant give your preaching a rest
Through your lessons you sacrifice
Cant you take your own advice?
You tell em not to cheat or lie
And enjoy yourself before you die
So why dont you live a little?
And become less noncommital
Immune to mistakes, is that it?
And youve never taken a hit
Feeling constantly on alert
For fear of ever being hurt
Thinking that you are the smartest
Doesnt always end up the best
So go follow your own advice
Or what you love youll sacrifice
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Re: Your Sacrificial Advice Again
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by ham323 on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 05:56:03 PM AEST
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Good poem. Kind of like double personality.
Giving yourself advice. You know you should accept. But then again, you cant. Hm. How conflicting. |
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Re: Your Sacrificial Advice Again
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 06:00:31 PM AEST
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You know, you made it right.
Sometimes we give advices to others, but those advices we don't apply them to ourselves. We sometimes doubt.
the last part:
So go follow your own advice
Or what you love you’ll sacrifice
Is the one that I felt like a slap in the face. That's very right. |
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Re: Your Sacrificial Advice Again
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 07:02:47 PM AEST
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| follow your own advice .... |
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Re: Your Sacrificial Advice Again
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by Adelle on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 12:42:16 PM AEST
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wow, brilliant- i mean to be able to get through to your self like that, good job, well written... it makes me want to do the same:)
thanks, shanna |
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