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Bloody Flames
Contributed by
lil_pup91
on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 07:05:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The color of blood
glowing errily in the pitch black night
Talon-shaped claws coated red
gleam in the sliver of light
In the eyes, a fire dances
nothing but uncontrollable flames
A feral growl come from deep within
an inhuman sound reaching ears
A tainted smell fills the air
the smell of death and blood making stomachs lurch
The light fades away
claws disappear leaving behind flames
A fire's flames which engulfs blood, all within his eyes
that slowly dies away
The cry of one tortured and broken fills the empty air and every beings soul
haunting them with his pain
With one last cry, blood falls to the ground
followed by the body
Ending the pain
For one last time
the eyes glow red
But the fire
is dead
Copyright ©
lil_pup91
... [
2006-05-27 19:05:49]
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Re: Bloody Flames
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by EddieDean on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 08:50:28 PM AEST
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Well, very dark poem indeed. But very well put together, nice work. Keep it up.
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Re: Bloody Flames
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by Amazon on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 09:45:19 PM AEST
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awsome imagery i loved it
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Re: Bloody Flames
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by AshRayne on
Saturday, 27th May 2006 @ 10:18:15 PM AEST
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the ending is powerful, a good ending to a good poem.
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