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Misguided Immortality
Contributed by
Legacy_of_Flame
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Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 01:25:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There's a certain placidity while I stand in the rain during the tranquility of the night,
Knowing I'm alone and the person I care for most will be alright,
The memories of what I once had quickly withered away,
The longing for her love lead to my very own dismay,
As I stand here now, the rain cleanses the emptiness inside,
A reminiscence of the dreams that I could not bear to hide..
There's nothing left to give, but my remaining morality..
The streetlights shine on my face, misguided immortality
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Re: Misguided Immortality
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 01:41:43 AM AEST
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