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Why do i like you?
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 06:28:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What is going on here?
You are my worst fear
I could easily fall apart
Yet, I cannot stop my heart
You are the one it follows
I can barely even swallow
When you are near me
I know it could never be
Why do I like you?
I will become blue
When you turn me down,
Bury my heart in the ground
Why can't my heart see,
We could never, ever be?
Why can't my heart hear
My mind's greatest fear?
I'm ready to arrest my heart
So it doesn't again break apart
Ready to lock my heart away
And save it for another day
What is going on here?
You are my worst fear
I could easily fall apart
Yet, I cannot stop my heart
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Re: Why do i like you?
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by Adriean on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 07:41:35 PM AEST
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| Good poem, strong theme. Must mean alot to you and that means it either happened or is happening. Which makes me tell you, if you love this person.... the hurt would be worth it. |
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Re: Why do i like you?
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by The_Young_Poet on
Sunday, 28th May 2006 @ 08:55:24 PM AEST
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| aww sad but good. I can relate. Nice Piece. |
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Re: Why do i like you?
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:14:28 AM AEST
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Awww, that's really good! It seems like it could be a song. lol For some reason I said it to kind of a musical beat. I understand how you feel...sucks, doesn't it? Well, great job anyway!!
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Re: Why do i like you?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 04:27:19 AM AEST
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A beautiful write and I can really relate
All I can say is... we can't choose who we fall in love with... the heart chooses them instead...
Hope everything worked out for you
~Ciz~ |
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