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I still love you
Contributed by
suzy
on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Seeing you again made my heart skip a beat
I was caught up in a whirlwind of memories
God it's been so long since you walked away
I wondered would you even remember me?
I opened my mouth and started to speak
But held the words back as a teardrop fell
Realizing you wouldn't want to talk to me
Why would you want to relive that hell?
I thought that I had moved ahead in life
But just the sight of you told me I felt the same
Why do I still love you when the feelings not mutual?
Why should I throw my heart back into love's game?
I walked away with words in my throat
Whispered I still love you if only I had known
Rounded the corner on that cold street
As into the wind my words were blown.
Copyright ©
suzy
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2003-02-07 04:30:00]
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Re: I still love you
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by TheSpiritx on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 04:36:54 AM AEST
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| Though short, which is not really a problem, this poem expresses a host of emotions. You composed it very well, managing to effectively use words in a manner that adds to the overall effectiveness. Nicely done. |
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Re: I still love you
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 06:01:52 AM AEST
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Lasca, I find this very moving.... Well done!! I'm so glad to see you posting again... Hope to see some happier ones soon...
Hugs,
Jenni |
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Re: I still love you
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 04:49:01 AM AEST
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| Suzy this is an incredible write ... I guess my heart was experiencing those same emotions as I read it ... so well written. I love the way you ended it with the words being lost in the wind ... :((((( |
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