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Rainbows.
Contributed by
ham323
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Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 07:07:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I wish you could. See the rainbows in my eyes. I wish you would. Watch the rainbows in my cries. These rainbows. They never fell from the sky. These are the rainbows. Youll only see in my eyes. And when Im dreaming of you. These rainbows, they pour from my soul. And when Im wishing for you. The rainbows are my whole. They watch for you. To see my beautiful tears. Do you hear the rainbows ringing your ears? These rainbows are what I make. The rain couldnt bring a rainbow like this. These are the rainbows of my wish. I only cry them because I cant share it with you. This moment of beautiful skies, so blue. You can always find my heart of gold. Just follow the rainbows I cry. I wish you could cry a rainbow for me. So I wouldnt be lost in the sky.
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Re: Rainbows.
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 07:59:38 PM AEST (User
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nicely done!
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Re: Rainbows.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 08:39:36 PM AEST (User
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Ham, truly a heartfelt poem with style and most important, sincerity. Well done Sir.
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Re: Rainbows.
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 09:39:16 PM AEST (User
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Good writing.
Rainbows are definently one of God's most magnificent creations.
huggs,
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Re: Rainbows.
(User Rating: 1 ) by MarLites on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 09:54:24 PM AEST (User
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I loved this. The feeling comes thru
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Re: Rainbows.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 02:43:20 PM AEST (User
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This is beautiful sad yes but vivid and delicate, keep up the good work.
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