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The silence of the sun.
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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Silence from the morning sun,
the beauty that it holds,
The fresh new day has just begun,
forming into Gods molds,
Smelling of the fresh air,
breathing it all inside,
looking to the skies without care,
taking life in stride,
feeling the warmth on my face,
wishing it will last,
the beauty is hard to erase,
but disapears fast,
birds chirping indelight,
I close my eyes to hear,
the silence than turns into night,
the beauty I see is clear,
silence from the wind I feel,
silence from the beautiful scene,
knowing this is all for real,
and not one of my dreams!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-02-07 05:30:00]
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Re: The silence of the sun.
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 08:06:15 AM AEST
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| ohh i love this, it has become one of my favorites of yours, very lovely, huggs nessa |
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Re: The silence of the sun.
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by Tanna on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 08:29:31 AM AEST
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| Winter is sure dragging its feet, eh? Spring cant come fast enough! I like this poem, brings out everything I miss about Spring. |
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Re: The silence of the sun.
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 10:19:17 AM AEST
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| beautifully worded, I wish it was spring to, warm and cozy, I hate being cold in the winter, thanks for this great write |
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Re: The silence of the sun.
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 04:45:26 AM AEST
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| Love this write of yours, and think it's my favourite so far. Lovely images and flows so beautifully. |
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Re: The silence of the sun.
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 03:42:51 PM AEST
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Yes, even I am waiting for that day And I live in Florida!! Beautiful warms feelings on a cold
and dreary day! Loved it.
Love,
Robert Edgar Burns |
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Re: The silence of the sun.
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by riverofwords on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 08:15:41 AM AEST
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great read ,great imagery
well done
peace be you journey
Terry |
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