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Please Just understand
Contributed by
Snugglebear
on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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My prayers
go unspoken
afraid
my prayers
will go unheard
i felt God once
in a midnight's dream
He swallowed me
took away my pain
i never felt ashamed
free i was indeed
i felt God once
Sweet air i breathed
everything was a comfort to me
parents. always there
know everything, they cared
but now they scream and yell
i'm living in a firey hell
every smell is a stench
that burns my lungs
Now i'm ashamed of it all
depression, heartbreak,
my life i'd take
but it must get better
to you i write this letter
i felft God once
But his eyes have turned away
A simple hug i crave
They read my words
but they don't feel thier pain
no one can grasp
while for life's air i gasp
sufficating me
please
one more breath
understand
so i
can
b r e a t h e. . . .
Copyright ©
Snugglebear
... [
2003-02-07 06:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Please Just understand
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by Cici on
Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 01:03:50 PM AEST
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This is an excellent poem. I feel your pain. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Keep up the writing
Claire |
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Re: Please Just understand
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 04:39:54 PM AEST
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| this is so, so good...and so true...wow... |
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Re: Please Just understand
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by steamsaint on
Saturday, 1st March 2003 @ 10:12:33 PM AEST
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| great poem i feel your pain |
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