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Outcome Pending
Contributed by
Aeicha
on
Monday, 29th May 2006 @ 11:28:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I find myself dwelling
In the words that you are yelling
And my sanity is bidding
For the cheapest reason selling
Now these words are flying
Faster than I'm buying
And the silence is fitting
As our points are dying
This glass house is breaking
From the promises we're forsaking
And its sins that the echoes are hitting
While our balance is shaking
The darkness is sinking
Too fast for our thinking
And this betrayal is winning
Because our loyalties aren't worth keeping.
Copyright ©
Aeicha
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2006-05-29 23:28:19]
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Re: Outcome Pending
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 12:42:20 AM AEST
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| This has a great flow and use of words. Good Job. |
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