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swirling inferno
Contributed by
iluvzacefron
on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 09:29:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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roaring with fire
drawing u near
fighting and fighting
but u feal no fear
hard to explain
the feeling is wierd
shoots out a flame
your eyes just get teared
you hardly can handle
the fiery blow
start to break down
with no where to go
not all defenseless
fight fire with fire
but all of the flames
just seem to get higher
it isn't your fault
the swirling orange flames
but the feeling inside
makes u wanta change
u want no more agony
get rid of the pain
pouring the water
flames stop to gain
the buring subsides
the fire is gone
everythings good
you can move on
the flowers grow back
utopia renewed
until the next time
the fires subdued
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iluvzacefron
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2006-05-30 21:29:58]
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Re: swirling inferno
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th May 2006 @ 10:02:32 PM AEST
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Very good writing. It's awesomly creative.
huggs,
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