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sitting in the rain
Contributed by
arakrune
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Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sitting in the rain
Contemplating twists of Cain
Blue skies above grey
Its just another day
Cigarettes burn in the ashtray
As I remember Avalon bay
Quiet thoughts slip through the mind
And beautiful vistas with rains that bind
Afternoons lost wandering the hills
Nights deepening and sunsets off movie reels
Its all just a journey through life
Eventually to find deaths kind knife
STR
10-25-02
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arakrune
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2003-02-07 09:00:00]
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Re: sitting in the rain
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by kangarose on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 10:10:57 PM AEST
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| love the way your poem flows here... bit of a sad ending though but enjoyed it... |
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Re: sitting in the rain
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 03:57:33 AM AEST
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| excellent imagery... i must read the rest... blessings... |
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Re: sitting in the rain
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:43:51 AM AEST
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The rain will tell you many things, I'm glad you were able to write its message down. Great piece.
Take care.
David |
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