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Suck My Thumb
Contributed by
Lancaster
on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 03:56:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Situated above the clouds
Stimulated
Navigated around
Detours none more profound
Then the path into the eternal ground
Shutter at the thought of being exposed
Of wondering who knows
Of making connections between friends and foes
Thumbs and toes
Tumble throws
Dumb makes the heart grow
Plums of raisins
Short of amazing
Spectacles of fires set ablazin
Through torture of hazing
The necessary craving
Are the thirsts enslaving
A soul to its roots, its beginnings
Chipmunks chase a nut
Birds feed their young
Regurgitated from the gut
Spit-up
Nutrition
Nesting nothing
Missing something
A donor of semen
A founder of breathing
The loaner is deceiving
When collection
Is sent for its retrieving
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Copyright ©
Lancaster
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2006-05-31 15:56:00]
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Re: Suck My Thumb
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 05:05:17 PM AEST
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| cool, not sure I understood it, but I liked it! good write! 2sdy x |
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Re: Suck My Thumb
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by Elite on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 08:11:22 AM AEST
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| a very 'interesting' poem - very enjoyable |
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