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The One
Contributed by
lonely_boy
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Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 01:04:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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torn by the one
who i thought would care
rocking back and forth
crying in my chair
i thought you were different
from all those other girls
but it seems i was wrong again
because you've destroyed my world
these tears aren't helping me
in removing your image from my mind
so i decide to fix that problem
by cutting my wrists with this knife
i've cut so deep
that there's a steady stream
i wanted us to always be
why'd you have to leave
i'm losing blood fast
and i pass out on the floor
but before i go
i'd like to see you once more
i thought you were the one for me
and i see that i was wrong
now that i'm dying
i'm glad that you're gone
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lonely_boy
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2006-06-01 01:04:15]
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Re: The One
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by drtylilsecret on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 08:06:06 AM AEST
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heart-wrenching....i love all your writes, but they're always so tragic, good luck getting better.
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Re: The One
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by Ruby2sdy on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 05:21:40 PM AEST
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nice, very honest.
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Re: The One
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by GemmaLouiseRose on
Friday, 1st August 2008 @ 07:56:51 PM AEST
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honesty is the best policy
times are hard, and ur expression is fantastic, keep doing it. x |
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