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My first love
Contributed by
c2b6s
on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 10:47:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Dark tents and musty couches
Empty promises we recounted
All the times you made me feel
i only needed you
Whispered words and lies you meant it
Under blankets just pretending
Through the rumors i defended
you hid me from the truth
It was my mistake
Sweet songs deep in the backseat
Lyrics "you make me complete"
I hear it all but i can't compete
With the sound of screaming lies
Muffled laughs into the pillow
Begging eyes "I love you, don't go"
Long goodbyes, I cared more than you know
All gone, my faith in love died
How could love be so fake?
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2006-06-01 22:47:44]
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Re: My first love
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 11:19:44 PM AEST
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| It's great when love can be as simple as it was for you back then, huh? Good write. |
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