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Just Beacuse
Contributed by
europeanprincess
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Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 10:59:14 PM in AEST
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This is often heard before
No wonder its a bore
Completely false in his name
So shy and forgotten what a shame
Blast from the past I forgot his smile
Conjure up memories and well be here for a while
Make it good he will stay
Watch him closely but stay away
In tune with my moves
I knew I was a fool
Trapped in his guilt
He sways through the room
It took one drink and I think he knew
Blessed be a witches curse
How many times can an orgasm burst?
A sad depart
I follow my friends
My last drink in hand
I waved goodbye to him
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Re: Just Beacuse
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by wizard on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 05:47:06 AM AEST
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awesome write!
wiz |
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Re: Just Beacuse
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by Drapes on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 10:20:25 AM AEST
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Nice job! Good rhythm!
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Re: Just Beacuse
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by This_Time_Imperfect on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 09:14:22 PM AEST
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| I like this a lot. The rhyming worked really well, and it flowed pretty well. At the beginning it was a little but rocky, but then it fell into a nice meter. Very nice. |
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