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Trapped
Contributed by
KarlaMarie
on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 03:02:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Red door, red door
Locked door
Keeps me inside
Hole in the wall
I see those eyes
Peeping, peeping, peeping
Watching, watching, watching
My windows are barred
Freedom is outside
Can never leave
I want freedom
Little rope, little rope
Bring me hope
Tie it to the window bar
Tie around my neck
Jump off my little chair
Dangle, dangle, dangle
Blue body swings
Left, right, left
Now I watch those eyes
Run in so fast
They can not catch me
I am free at last
KarlaMarie
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KarlaMarie
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2006-06-02 03:02:11]
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Re: Trapped
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 03:09:16 AM AEST
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woa pretty intense there.
good write and don't kill yourself.
take care |
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Re: Trapped
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by EddieDean on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 06:27:59 PM AEST
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Very quick write and very intese at the same time. Good work.
-Eddie Dean |
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Re: Trapped
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 06:46:40 AM AEST
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One of the best Poems I have read coming from you. Well expressed, to the point, descriptive and easy to read.
You have created your own style a style I hev begun to enjoy. Keep writing Karla. I want more |
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