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My life on the rocks...
Contributed by
Elite
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Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 06:25:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I stand on the rocks
Mighty ships coming to and from the docks
The spray of the churning sea hits me
This is the only time when I ever felt truly free
My ship has sunk, my life has died
This sea is the ocean of tears Ive cried
The wind has never settled down
One more move and I will drown
Theres no life jacket for my help
Just a painful gurgle is my yelp
If I stopped the tears I would survive
But theres no more strength in me to stay alive
Other ships just pass on by
Watching me drown, while I cry
My clutching hand is all thats left
My last gesture before I enter death!
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Elite
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2006-06-02 06:25:17]
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Re: My life on the rocks...
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by jujubee21 on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 08:25:16 AM AEST
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very emotional poem
and very well written |
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Re: My life on the rocks...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 04:38:12 PM AEST
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You know, I like this type of poems. The Ones that use imagination, The ones that use things to drescribe persons. Like In here while saying Other Ships Just pass On by watching me drown. Instead of Saying that persons pass next to, and don't stop to help.
The Ones in which you have to analyze and apply them to life.
So Well Written. I like the sadness in this one. And Teaches a lesson about life.
Nice. |
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Re: My life on the rocks...
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by EddieDean on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 06:23:22 PM AEST
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Wow, nice work, its very sad and dark. Very well put together.
-Eddie Dean |
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