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Going under
Contributed by
mali
on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 12:17:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Im going under
Beneath the ground
6ft under
Without a sound
I hear the words
Then I see
A glimpse of light
I rest in peace
Drifting towards
Next phase of life
My wings break off
Unable to fly
So I go 6ft under
Beneath the ground
There I stay
Without a sound.
Copyright ©
mali
... [
2006-06-04 00:17:24]
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Re: Going under
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 12:19:08 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet. Great job. |
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Re: Going under
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 02:20:06 AM AEST
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..short and sweet.. your darkness..
can't say abolutely, when, how or why..
but nonetheless.. a fantastic write~
Truly..
Billy |
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