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too late
Contributed by
mjh0813
on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 09:05:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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her hand is shaking
she cant hold the blade still
she finally gets herself together and makes one swift but deep slice
now shes done it
she wishes she could take it back but its too late
its all done
theres blood everywhere
shes crying and hoping its just a dream
she crys out "im sorry" but no one is around to hear her
she begins to fade and as she takes her last breath the blade falls from her hand
now shes gone and no body understands why
she seemed so happy
she was beautiful and she even had the perfect guy
so why would she want to die
everyone wonders and its the same question all ask but its too late it wont bring her back
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2006-06-04 09:05:57]
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Re: too late
(User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 12:56:10 PM AEST
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"she was beautiful and she even had the perfect guy
so why would she want to die"
good question, why would she? just...moving?
~natalya
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