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Two Swallows
Contributed by
Sony_Boat
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Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 12:55:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The sky swallowed
a sweet song.
prolonged twitters
all day long;
a simple tune
tswit, tswit, tswit!
beyond the moon
swallowed the sky.
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Sony_Boat
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2006-06-04 12:55:09]
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Re: Two Swallows
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by wizard on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 09:46:56 PM AEST
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i loved this sony, great job.
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Re: Two Swallows
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 04:33:15 AM AEST
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Very crative writing.
huggs,
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Re: Two Swallows
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by Man_On_High on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 09:04:04 PM AEST
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leaves much to the imagination.. a splendiferous thought-
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