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Closure
Contributed by
trini
on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 02:01:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I found closure.
But through a way I wished not to
A numbness,
Overwhelming in power
A force that I can not control
Through the closure
I found a space
Where gentle melodies float through my head
Like wind through the trees
We see it and feel it
But are unable to grab it
Hold on
To nothing.
So I fall
Through the hole in my spirit
As it cries for attention
From a straight face
I no longer cry
But thats all I wish to do.
A life story I'm sure.
For most I presume.
That found their closure
And regretted it.
Copyright ©
trini
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2006-06-04 14:01:11]
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Re: Closure
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 02:14:17 PM AEST
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Really enjoyed this capturing poem. In my opinion ya also caught closure, too. Sometimes regrettable, I find comfort in believin' everything happens for reasons, most times, beyond our ken. Fantastic work!
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