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Bedtime Stories
Contributed by
Exodus
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Sunday, 4th June 2006 @ 11:38:54 PM in AEST
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In a moment of confidentiality
You used to be so pretty
I want to move
Things aren't so smooth
Stealing your stories
I hope you get stung by killer bees
In the absence of your decency
I remember what you never meant to me
Sitting on the porch
The summer could really scorch
Only on the outside
But your storie's still alive
What was it that you said to me?
Of course I don't mean literally
What about in the meantime?
When the hell do I get mine?
Let's just forget it happened actually
And one day we just might possibly
Forget this **** truthfully
And we can forget all your stories
Copyright ©
Exodus
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2006-06-04 23:38:54]
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Re: Bedtime Stories
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 12:35:32 PM AEST
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that was so odd but i absolutely loved it. probly cause i could see myself saying those exact same words (plus a few more bleeped ones) to somebody i know, and because it was fantastically written. there's something secretive about it, like there's something you don't want to reveal but....well i'll stop analyzing your poem and just say great write.
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