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The World Watches
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 07:37:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
Patriotic
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T he World Watches
As the world sits and watches
one disaster after another
People killing people
mother,father,sister and brother
Something must be done
to stop what is going on
Please let the world wake up
to a more promising dawn
You can not wait to long
or until each disaster does occur
Put out the fires now
before to many begin to stir
With all the modern technology
we never seem to be ready
Through out the world,weather wise
we are completely unsteady
Along with all of this
the extremist never stop
They have turned the world
into their own butcher shop
The world must stop their Watching
and now, before it is to late
Everyone must come together
to bring about a better fate
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2006-06-05 07:37:58]
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Re: The World Watches
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by ever1der on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 09:43:17 AM AEST
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| I agree that the madness must stop, but I don't have a lot of hope as things just seem to be geting worse. But..as to the poetry, good job. |
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Re: The World Watches
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by ham323 on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 10:34:31 AM AEST
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0o0o0o. Good poem. Straight to the point.
It's easy to understand also. Loved it. *5 stars* |
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Re: The World Watches
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 01:02:47 PM AEST
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| Yes enjoyed this poem, now if we could just teach everyone to stand together, it would work. It says it all this poem. Sue x |
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Re: The World Watches
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 02:52:20 PM AEST
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Wise words Bruce. So easily said, but seemingly hard to do, no?
Humans -- will we ever do the right thing? Let's hope so or
there may not be a world left for any of us to worry about .
A most thought provoking write.
~Breezy
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Re: The World Watches
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by bronzen on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 03:29:11 PM AEST
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| excellent poem words written well |
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Re: The World Watches
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 05:04:46 PM AEST
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My sentiments exactly, put in your words. Good Write.
wabl
KenMoore
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