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Old Man
Contributed by
KiEme
on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Old Man
That solemn, joyful face
Lips in unknown position
Penetrating, peering eyes
Thin, unattended beard
Is that a laugh, joyful and free?
Or is it sarcastic and cynical?
Is he sorrowed by the condition of humanity?
Or does he rejoice in its wonder?
Are his eyes merely seeing?
Or are they looking into my soul?
He is leaving
Perhaps to a party
Perhaps to save the world
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KiEme
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2003-02-07 22:40:00]
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Re: Old Man
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by kangarose on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 04:55:07 PM AEST
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| i like your description here of an old man and the questions you have asked as well... its a short poem but it shows promise of an up and coming poet... great write |
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Re: Old Man
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by tawakwan on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 03:22:18 PM AEST
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| i thought it well,until the last couple of lines |
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