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You
Contributed by
candysears
on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 08:29:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I thought I dreamed of you
Last night
While the moon was full
You stood over yonder
Way..
As I cried out for thee
You smile and said to me
I will be there by three
You stood under the cold
Frosty moon
My heart beat rapidly as
I waited by the water shore...
Excited, was I under the
Cold frosty moon..
By time the clock struck
Midnight,
I still stood under the cold
Frosty moon..
I tremble with joy..
Excited, so excited as I
Tremble when your shadow
Glimpse around at me..
Heart bursting, aching
Inside
My soul-crying deep with
In
Where know one could hear..
While you were telling me
Good-bye
You turn your back away
From me..
You walked into the morning
Sunrise..
Deep yellow was the sun
It sent a rainbow for you
To find your way home
Leaving such a large void
Nothing else could fill the
Space..
Such emptiness So many
Tears
As I thought I dreamed of
You
To smell, to feel your
Warm embrace..
To tremble...
As you slowly vanish into
The rays of the rainbow
As I awaken with many,many
Tears
Copyright ©
candysears
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2006-06-05 20:29:19]
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Re: You
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by jerseysue on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 01:26:02 AM AEST
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| Oh lost love, and what it does to our minds. Expressed in such a lovely sad way. Thank you. Sue x |
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Re: You
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by bronzen on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 03:31:42 PM AEST
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| written well |
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Re: You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 05:16:29 PM AEST
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Such sadness in here. That last line is a heart breaker!
You've captured emotion well in this. I felt it searing through
to the end. Excellent post!
~Breezy |
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