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Of lilies and Ivies
Contributed by
damned_saint
on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 11:43:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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daughter's of northern star
from the seeds of fire
in valleys and mountains
swiftly blooming
seventeen years of waiting
governed by the god's above
as their petals bloomed constantly
shimmering vividly by the grace of the sun
the sweet scent of poisonous mist
in the mountains over the valleys
lovely but fatal
killing you slowly
there she goes, the lovely maiden of fire
dressed in scarlet butterflies
waiting for the spring to come
tales foretold in another lifetime
shades of purple, scents of desire
hear me now my dear maiden of fire
as the day gives way to the night
join me in this eternal delight
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Re: Of lilies and Ivies
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by slogan on
Monday, 5th June 2006 @ 11:55:07 PM AEST
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| Outstanding piece of poetry..nice flow...I really enjoyed reading this....great job..jh |
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Re: Of lilies and Ivies
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 03:11:27 AM AEST
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wow!
Very thought provoking, tantalizing write.
huggs,
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Re: Of lilies and Ivies
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Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 12:14:57 PM AEST
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| loved the title as well as the poem |
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Re: Of lilies and Ivies
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 03:02:57 PM AEST
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a lovely write full of images and a flow and set all of its own.
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