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Loathe
Contributed by
darkscorpio
on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Walk away from the addiction Try to stop that urge for friction In my mind and in my head I hate you I want you dead Thinking bout the past, in a time When I hurt and had the rhyme Words pour out, like my tears Look at all these wasted years In the kitchen all alone Not asleep, but no ones home Mindless slave, to this ***** Resentment, an endless pit When can I crawl out of this hole that exists in my mind? When can I realize Im loved, and I have little time? Family new, the past is gone, except inside my head Will I ever learn this lesson? Use it well, or will it be shed Reaching out, for someone To take this pain and shut it down All this regret and hurt I loathe Want to stick it six feet underground In a grave, where it belongs Instead of writing these ***** up songs I want to kill it, destroy the past But I fear I will not last
I hate whats here, what Ive become A mindless slave to everyone Thats ever hurt me, made me bleed Long time ago planted a seed Inside my soul, and I cry tears Of blood, and waste so many years I want this sickness out of me I want to wake up and be free Instead of sitting in this room With all these feelings of dark gloom I have a child I have a wife I want my g*dd**n f**k**g life back Let me go, let me go now Ill get through this somehow.
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darkscorpio
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2003-02-08 00:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Loathe
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheSpiritx on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 12:56:53 AM AEST (User
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Very nice. I enjoyed the rhyming and context of the poem. |
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Re: Loathe
(User Rating: 1 ) by wolfflow on
Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 02:25:19 AM AEST (User
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that is the strongest poem i have read on this site yet, the depth of feelimg in it is immense |
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Re: Loathe
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 08:46:44 PM AEST (User
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Wow... I'm at a loss for words very strongly written poem. I enjoyed this a lot. Wow...
Bobo (Joel) |
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