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My Enemy
Contributed by
brokenheartsbleed
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Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 10:59:04 PM in AEST
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I stare into his eyes
Fierce with rage
For something I dont know
His face is scarred
And worn down
Burned from the sun
That hides his secrets
His breathing is heavy
Like that of a wild animal
And his fists are clenched
I can see the white in his knuckles
He seems like something is bothering him
I think that he is misunderstood
But this war was waged long before
And I am only here to continue
What has already been started
Its a never ending battle
Back and forth we swing
Trying to destroy each other
But no one seems to win
I can see my reflection in his eyes
He hates me because of what I am
All he wants is for something better
Something I think I cant be
And I close my eyes to him
I look down in shame
I cant do this again
I take a swing at him
As the mirror breaks
And shatters into broken fragments
Of my reflection on the floor
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Re: My Enemy
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by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 04:16:20 AM AEST
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I like this line
He hates me because of what I am
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Re: My Enemy
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 04:18:00 PM AEST
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Pretty intense personal reflection here...wow. This is a very open and honest write. Nicely done, and thanks for sharing.
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