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Untitled 2
Contributed by
lost_in_the_darkness09
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Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 01:22:04 PM in AEST
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I love you more than words can say,
But sometimes I just need to get away.
No matter what you do, I'll always love you.
Even if it kills me, I'll trust you.
I'd still put my life in your hands,
Even though you've already torn my heart into strands.
What happened to the happiness you promised me?
It seems that you've forgotten all about me.
It hurts to think that you don't love me.
But if you really loved me, you'd accept the way I wanted to be.
You wouldn't waste your time trying to change me,
And accept the reality.
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Re: Untitled 2
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 5th December 2006 @ 04:25:27 AM AEST
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wow! i love the flow.. the way u wrote it.. its very sad!.. don't worry..
try an move on.. coz no matter hw much u cry, care or die.. he wnt come back.. dey just like 2 play us like dolls! we'll show them we aint one!! and we can be ok without em!
remember once a person is gone.. if he never comes back, he wasn't urs from the beggining.. u have 2 wait for ur true love.. just be patient n calm.. n trust me everythin will be alright.. i knw its hard to move on but time will heal.. just keep urself busy..
take care
good write....
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