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Blazed Peace
Contributed by
Exodus
on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 03:50:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Sometimes I wonder when
As I regret again and again and again
Feeling sick living with all this sin
I am self-destructive
Forcefully productive
With all this sin, deep inside I live
With all the things in which I try to cope
Sitting with an empty feeling at the end of my rope
Around the world in a coma, with a hole in my boat
And then you're coming at me
Like some incompatible anomaly
With a smile on my face, its a frown actually
With my head spinning and with me never winning
With all the things and with life's little stings
I'm contemplating, no so much self-hating
In circles or in squares, every jump comes to dares
But then again I got me no cares
I hope after I
It seems you'd rather me cry
Gripping
Whipping
Staring at my
Teeth baring, why
Like a rocket headed for the moon
The trip will be over but not a moment too soon
I can escape this hate
Maybe you could self-relate
Perspective
Subjective
You're so respected
There I said it, yes I did
Copyright ©
Exodus
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2006-06-07 15:50:40]
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Re: Blazed Peace
(User Rating: 1 )
by alasdaircairns on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 06:37:10 PM AEST
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| Superb, angry yet articulate. Hope you're ok dude cos you've got real talent there!!! |
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