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Love Is
Contributed by
BRONZEN
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Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 04:34:31 PM in AEST
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Love is a contact sport you have to tackle it from all angles
Love is not blind if you submit to unwanted tolerances you will become entangled
Love is like a basketball dribbling out of bounds
You have to retrieve it and keep it within your grounds
Love is like a merry-go-round here we go again
If there is no communication that ride will never end
Love is like a debate session not willing to agree upon anything
If both would stop vying to win the argument and heed to what the other is saying no more issues that subject will bring
Love is like a weapon it can hurt you and pierce real deep
If you don't understand one another your hearts will always be a target for an insult retreat
Overall love is beautiful no matter what circumstances you go through
If two people love each other unconditonally they will learn to live in virtue
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BRONZEN
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Re: Love Is
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 06:33:22 PM AEST
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excellent write! nice job!
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Re: Love Is
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 07:22:12 PM AEST
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| nice, not exactly your stereotypical "love poem", a small breath of fresh air |
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Re: Love Is
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 08:15:40 PM AEST
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A most uplifting and beautifully penned poem. I like the way you've brought this across to ur reader.
Overall love is beautiful no matter what circumstances you go through
If two people love each other unconditonally they will learn to live in virtue
How true these words are. I totally agree with you. Well done u have done a fine job with this awesome write.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Love Is
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by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 10:22:30 PM AEST
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not being a fan of love, i do however agree with this poem.
lovely write
KarlaMarie |
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Re: Love Is
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:31:25 AM AEST
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I agree with ~*Suzie Q*~ and I think ya said the right things 'bout "communication", "unconditional", and "vying to win". My compliments.
wabl
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Re: Love Is
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by candysears on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 03:50:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful write...
God Bless! |
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Re: Love Is
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 04:25:07 PM AEST
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| very nicely written |
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