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It's your life...
Contributed by
kellog
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Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 06:19:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Where do you go every time you get high?
to a place where all of your worries die
slowly forgetting every great memory
eats through your mind like a growing disease
As you take each hit, one by one
a little piece of you, forgotten and gone
slipping further into this abusive drill
youll never realize, until it kills
This hobby of yours, it pulls you apart
theres nothing left of you, not even a heart
cant even remember whats worth fighting for
as you let your life walk out the door
The hurt it brings, the pain you cause
see right past the love, reveals your flaws
tell me again that its your last puff
but in reality, you found your true love...
One day youll know, one day youll see
why I fought so hard for you and me
too high to realize what youve lost
was it all worth it for the pot?
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kellog
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2006-06-07 18:19:19]
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Re: It's your life...
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 06:22:16 PM AEST
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| awesome write... i can totally relate with this message A++++!!!! |
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Re: It's your life...
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by alasdaircairns on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 06:39:15 PM AEST
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| Such a shame to see lives waste away in a haze of smoke. In time I hope he will realise you're far more important. A great little write. x |
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Re: It's your life...
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 10:26:22 PM AEST
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In reality your write really nail to the coar of what alot of people have a problem with.
thank you for sharing this very deep write.
take care |
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