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Behind This Closed Door
Contributed by
HeArTbRoKEnGiRl
on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 05:22:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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As I sit here in a corner,
just me, myself, and I,
I think of my life and I start to cry
For I know that none of the things that I was told was true
I then lift up the sleeve of my shirt
and I wonder how one little blade
can cause so much pain...
Although it may be painful,
It is still worth it in the end
The pain of the blade cutting into my vein makes me forget about my troubles and makes the sadness in my life seem pretend
As I look into the blade, I see the reflection of a girl with a tear stained face and I wonder what happened to make her feel this way...
It is then that I think about taking my life, but I know that if I were to die,
then too many people would cry and I don't wanna cause anyone to be in pain over me...
So in the meantime, I'll just keep on a mask and I'll hide my pain behind a fake smile
I'll pretend that everything is okay
and then I'll sit in my room with a razor blade... just me, myself, and I
and then, only then, will I allow myself to cry
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2006-06-08 17:22:19]
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Re: Behind This Closed Door
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by xforever_faking_a_smile3x on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 05:58:00 PM AEST
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wow.
i really like this poem. i understand where your coming from on this, you want to die or cause yourself harm in any way you can but than you promised someone close to you that you wouldnt
i love this poem great job.
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Re: Behind This Closed Door
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by xforever_faking_a_smile3x on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 05:58:02 PM AEST
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wow.
i really like this poem. i understand where your coming from on this, you want to die or cause yourself harm in any way you can but than you promised someone close to you that you wouldnt
i love this poem great job.
---tay--- |
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Re: Behind This Closed Door
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by KarlaMarie on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 10:09:15 PM AEST
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I have taken part in self harm before, to my ultimate shame, so i can understand what you are saying.
I still have the scars.
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Re: Behind This Closed Door
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:51:19 AM AEST
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Well written, but saddens me to read this is happening to such young people today. As a Father this would really scare me to know that my child would be doing this to themself. Please take care.
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Re: Behind This Closed Door
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by Whisper on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 03:31:02 PM AEST
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Thank you for sharing your write . I hope that the words you expressed have passed. Bleeding is not the answer. Every drop of your blood is precious and Yours is golden it's a part of someones Life. Your eyes will one day be open and that true person will say to you those words and it will make you put the blades away. Have a faith
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