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You and I
Contributed by
BRONZEN
on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 02:16:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I know we said that this relationship
is over
our words flowed heavily blaming it
all on the hurt
I thought everything we did was based
around us
our bond was whisked away like the
mere dust
The music we hear playing saddens us
so
Its tearing our hearts apart were
familiarizing with every note
We are not feeling the love that we
felt once before
you didnt look behind and I didnt
look up when you walked out that
door
(You and I) was our song but it seems
we both have forgotten the words
Maybe that song is an oldie and is
labeled for beginning lovebirds
We should of updated to a new song
(Make it last for ever)
Its too late now we both made a
decision that cant be altered
Years of love has gone away with no
chance of reconciliation
We both know although we cant be
together
in our hearts our names will be graven
Copyright ©
BRONZEN
... [
2006-06-09 02:16:39]
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Re: You and I
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 01:24:25 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, sorry this happend.Well worded clearly stated from a most familar voice, called the heart.
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Re: You and I
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 01:05:07 AM AEST
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...THOse LYrics!.. (( ..at least they should be..))
.. are abSOLUTELY UNDYING!!
...F$#@!*' AWESOME FEEL!!
((tapped foot and finger as I read - in time...))
TRULY~
Billy |
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Re: You and I
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by Adelle on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 01:58:09 AM AEST
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i am so so sorry... well expressed... very sad... keep on going with your head held high, good luck:)
shanna |
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