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Masterpiece
Contributed by
BRONZEN
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Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 03:39:46 AM in AEST
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God had an idea and set his plans into motion
the dust from the ground he looked upon that was his notion
God needed someone to live on the earth which he had created
He needed it governed and flourished with this in mind the plan inflated
God picked up the dust from the earth and formed an human masterpiece
He looked upon of what he had done and knew it was of great genius
Man was the name God called him without any hesitations
Strong with pure masculinity was all Gods intentions
Aromas of the dust from whence Man came while tilling and soiling the earth
Man made preparations for the life God had given him with the abilities of his hands he built his hearth
Masterpiece of stature with inner and outer great strength
Leadership was bestowed upon Man and soul for recompense
Heart and mind is Mans Forte
two weapons he will use to advance and not disgrace
Knowledge and wisdom was embedded in him so he could produce his facility
Man will touch and the feeling will leave a sense of security
His eyes will pierce with all intensity
His voice roars of passion with words spoken of eloquence and force
Man will not deter from whom he is he will let nature run its course
His stroll is of such confidence and movements that deserves respect
Relentless to what will weaken him mysteriously inside his secrets are kept
A masterpiece is presented of mystique and so refined
God made Man in his image the brilliant masterpiece of his sublime
Copyright ©
BRONZEN
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Re: Masterpiece
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 04:46:37 AM AEST
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As the story goes he actually made woman first then took one of her ribs and made man.
wo man.
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emy |
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Re: Masterpiece
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 11:45:10 AM AEST
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Emystar took m' line or so it seems. I was gonna say it took man givin' up a rib to make him a true image o' God complete 'n' all. Very very good write. Wish modern man would live up to the Image.
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Re: Masterpiece
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 08:35:46 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry.
I don't know what I was thinkin.
Please for give me, please?
I do know the truth it was woman that got him in so much trouble.
You're a great writer.
hugg, smiles,
emy
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