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In The Wee Hours
Contributed by
candysears
on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:21:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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In the wee hours of the night
I sit in my little corner nook
Looking out my window
Pane
Loneliness engulf me while
I sit all along in solitude.
Vex by sleepless
Nights
Idling with wild thoughts
Running through my head
As I wait for the dawning
Maybe than my thoughts
Will make sense..
Maybe I want feel so
Desperate and all along
Maybe my imagination
Will bring sun.
Brighten my mind to
Enlighten my soul,
In the wee hours of the night
I sit in my little corner nook
Looking out my window
Pane
While the silhouettes of the
Night shadows..
Brush against my window
Pane..
Making creeping, ghastly
Noises,
In hope, the dawn will soon arrive
While the light will spread
As the shadow in the
Night
The sun will defy the darkness
As the sun will prevail..
For the dawning of the day
Will shine..
Until the moon rising over
The horizon
Copyright ©
candysears
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2006-06-10 10:21:52]
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Re: In The Wee Hours
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 01:48:04 PM AEST
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| the moon rising over the horizon..I liked that visual. |
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Re: In The Wee Hours
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by bronzen on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 05:38:30 PM AEST
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| i enjoyed reading this poem |
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Re: In The Wee Hours
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by irodethetrain2u on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 12:57:41 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this one. The way you laid the words out creates a dark and beautiful emotion within me. |
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Re: In The Wee Hours
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 05:55:23 AM AEST
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Well, I certainly feel the mood of this piece. I've been staying up very late recently, and trying like mad to put into words the strong sense of longing that comes over me at night. I'm still at it; it does its best to remain unexorcised. Still, I would not trade it.
Nicely, and sensitively, done. Keep it up.
Andrew |
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Re: In The Wee Hours
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:35:39 AM AEST
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Ahhhh yes....! I think this is indeed something many a poet/writer can relate to! When our mind just won't hush, and insists we stay up with pen and pad...Nicely done. Keep it up!!
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Re: In The Wee Hours
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 03:15:47 PM AEST
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I enjoyed that Nice write
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