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DON'T CHA THINK
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 08:23:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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SHHhhhh!
Don't Say A Word
SultryRose's Signatures
Go ahead pretend you're not there.
I'm no fluzzie jus lookin for sex.
My heart belongs to you.
Will luv you eternal, what the heck?
Don't cha think I know you're there
Readin every thought in my heart.
Give me some credit darlin.
Knew you was there, from start.
Yea, get carried away at times
Still I'm free thinkin, it's true.
Bein a writer to empty my head.
Oh darlin, there's no one but you.
Two years been waiten, uh huh.
Been patient so you can think.
Jus want your luv tried, true.
Savin my luvin don't let our ship sink.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2006-06-10 20:23:25]
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by shelby on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:11:29 PM AEST
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I loved the way this read and the message behind it, nicely done.
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:12:30 PM AEST
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I do think you did a very
good job on your poem
and I hope your ship
doesn't sink I hope it goes with the
motion of the ocean calm or ruff
just as is life at time times easy others ruff
gr8 writing and keep up the good work |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:22:20 PM AEST
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I agree with Shelby.. it took no effort at all to appreciate your sentiments Emy..
a fine work.
B |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 10:59:55 PM AEST
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It has a stage presence and a baudvill (sp?) flavor to it. A fun read focusing on love and commitment.
Well done, emy
Will |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 10:48:43 AM AEST
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Sometimes men are just stupid ; )
*giggle*
I like the unabashed outpouring here Emy...it's sincere, and to the point...Good for you---go get 'em!
Scorp. |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by bronzen on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 04:38:39 PM AEST
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| beautiful job |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 05:33:39 PM AEST
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Talk about puttin' the flower BUD of somethin' special into a relationship! Wow! This sucker is HOT! Great work, emy!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by wizard on
Sunday, 11th June 2006 @ 07:09:58 PM AEST
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nicely done, emy...great write!
wiz |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 12:56:38 AM AEST
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I agree with what Michelle said.
great job. |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th June 2006 @ 08:42:05 PM AEST
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Emy~
Dear friend such beautiful penned lines filled with love and commitment for ur guy. May ur ship never sink sweetie. Always a delight to read ur wonderful work. Keep penning Emstar!
love ya,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 12:40:47 AM AEST
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if you sink I'll rescue you emy
well done |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 06:31:45 PM AEST
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*rotflmbo @ Scorp*
*gathers thoughts*
Okay . . . yeah, sometimes certain men can be
a bit dense, but they are so darn loveable aren't they?
He is lucky to have you emy. Great write!
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 08:39:51 AM AEST
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Well stated my friend.
Excellent write, as always.
Jeff |
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Re: DON'T CHA THINK
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th June 2006 @ 02:50:21 AM AEST
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A very lovely message and has a nice musical flow to it.
Nicely done.
Tim |
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